Friday, July 30, 2010


जीत! 
हज़ारों मरे 
लाखों घायल,
कई लापता
क्या किया हासिल?

जीत!!

अगर यह जीत है
तो हार क्या थी?
झुके-झके कन्धों से चलते
मानव की
असली हार यही है.
बस फ़र्क इतना है,
हम शर्मसार नहीं हैं.

15 comments:

Vivek VK Jain said...

PS: This poem published in my school magazine 'Pratikhsa' in 2002, when I was in 9th std. Later published in 'Navbharat' Bhopal in Dec2009 issue.
Written on Kargil war in sept 2002.

संजय भास्कर said...

VK BHAI
कैसे लिख जाते हो यार ऐसा सब..........

संजय भास्कर said...

THANKS VK BHAI...
AAPNE HUMARE SHATH APNI RACHNA SHARE KI

manjeet said...

sahi kaha aapne ... aise hi bebaak likhte raho

Gazal Bharadwaj said...

yeh sukh kaisa shaasan ka,
shaasan re maanav mann ka.
giri bhaar bana sa tinka.
yeh ghata tope do din ka...
kar vijayi ka abhimaan bhang...

adreamygal said...

True ! wars are just meant for destruction , and any win , is definitely a biggest lose !

Saumya said...

I'm speechless...indeed ye haar hi hai....bauhat accha likha hai...kam shabd hain...par message is loud and clear

Sabi Sunshine said...

Dear very nice... i have no words to explain how good it is? You are so talented dear!

Have a friendship day too!

love
Sunshine

Vivek VK Jain said...

@sanjay, sir, thanks for such a nice comment.....but u r the master of this art.
ye ques aapse hona chahiye.

Vivek VK Jain said...

@manjeet, thanx ji......chalo aapko yaha aane ka vaqt to mila!

Vivek VK Jain said...

@gazal, saumya. thanx for commenting....ur appreciation is my strength.

Vivek VK Jain said...

@adreamygirl, thanx for visit and comment!
@subi, happy frndsp day!

ranjana said...

nice one...keep it up

दिगम्बर नासवा said...

बहुत खूब ... ये जीत नही मानवता की हार है ...

cbjainbigstar said...

well done..
please keep it up..
but study is also important.
may your dreams come true ,blessings on dussehra.

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