Friday, May 28, 2010

बुढ़ापा







तब.....
मैं उसे,
कभी बेटू, कभी छोटू,
कभी चिल्ड, कभी शैतान,
कभी प्यारे, कभी दुलारे,
कह के बुलाता था,
और वो दौड़ा चला आता था.

अब....
वो मुझे,
कभी बुड्ढ़े, कभी ओल्डी,
कभी बापू, कभी दद्दू,
कभी निकम्मे,कभी पागल,
बुलाता है,
और मैं दौड़ा चला आता हूँ
,

10 comments:

Saumya said...

very poignant...

sudhir singh said...

maarmarik.......

swadesh panday said...

bahut achha....kam aur seedhe shabdon me achhi feelings.......

Vivek VK Jain said...

thanx swadesh ji........

Vivek VK Jain said...

@sudhir marmik to shabdo ka jadu h,,,,,

Vivek VK Jain said...

@saumya thanx,

Ramesh Sood said...

Kabii woh wakt aayega jab woh mujhe kabhii toh bulayega
Magar main Daud nahin paoonga
Aur apni jagah par rahte huye khush ho jaoonga
Kii meri yaad toh Aati hai..Phir Bhagwan se baat karte huye, us ke liye Duayen mangoonga
Ooskii Lambi Umar ke liye
Aur apne liye bhii, apne bache huye dinon ke liye..

Sorry my dear... first of all thanks for giving me the pleasure of adding my page in your list.. it becomes very reaasuring.. second.. your very poignant poem made my thoughts run somewhere in past many places and experiences.. and compelled me to pen something.. forgive me you feel it an intrusion.. thanks dear..

Ek Rahi said...

aap 20 saal k hai!!!!!!!! aapki kavita ki gahraai dekh kar nhi lagta....bahut marmik aur umda shabd liye huye, shadad isse achhi tarah khud ka jhela bhi feelings show nhi kr sakta tha.
mei blogging nhi krti par aapki kavita zaroor padne aati hu yahaa......likhte rahiye, shubh kaamnaye.

Vivek VK Jain said...

mshyad marmikta jhelne par nhi mahsoos karne se ati h, sayad isliye ye sab ban paya......
itne achhe cmmnt ke liye dhanyavad, u made my day.......thnx ji.
ha, yese hi yaha aate rahiye.....sambal milega.

shweta said...

as true as the old age itself...

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